Consent Wording

[Marvin Addison]

>
> I like this one but would propose "The information above will be shared
> with the service if you proceed".
>

Since you're the second person to suggest this, I took a moment to
research. I thought an if-clause required the conditional "would be
shared", but it appears that "will be shared" is indeed the more correct
form for a consequence that is likely. [1,2] This is called "first
conditional," for what it's worth.

M

[1]
http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/conditionals-verb-tense-in-if-clauses/
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[2] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Conditional_sentence#First_conditional
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