Consent Wording

[Cantor, Scott]

On 11/18/14, 9:12 PM, "Marvin Addison" <marvin.addison at gmail.com> wrote:

>I'd like to propose a couple changes to consent UI message wording so 
>that the text reads more naturally:
>
>
>-idp.attribute-release.rejectMessage                = If you reject that 
>the information about you is sent to the described service, you will not 
>be able to continue to the service because it requires your data to work 
>properly. In that case, close the
> web browser windows to abort the login.
>+idp.attribute-release.rejectMessage                = If you decline to 
>send your information to the requester, you will not be able to continue 
>to the service because it requires information about you to work 
>properly. In that case, close the web browser
> to abort the login.

The abort thing I think will go away, or be significantly changed, that 
needs to just signal an error event, not just block progress. I'm working 
on that next.

>-idp.attribute-release.confirmationQuestion         = The information 
>above is being released as you access the service. Do you accept that 
>this information is sent to the service whenever you access it?
>+idp.attribute-release.confirmationQuestion         = The information 
>above would be shared with the service if you proceed. Do you agree to 
>release this information to the service every time you access it?

+1

-- Scott