Consent Wording

[Marvin Addison]

I'd like to propose a couple changes to consent UI message wording so that
the text reads more naturally:

-idp.attribute-release.rejectMessage                = If you reject that
the information about you is sent to the described service, you will not be
able to continue to the service because it requires your data to work
properly. In that case, close the web browser windows to abort the login.
+idp.attribute-release.rejectMessage                = If you decline to
send your information to the requester, you will not be able to continue to
the service because it requires information about you to work properly. In
that case, close the web browser to abort the login.

-idp.attribute-release.confirmationQuestion         = The information above
is being released as you access the service. Do you accept that this
information is sent to the service whenever you access it?
+idp.attribute-release.confirmationQuestion         = The information above
would be shared with the service if you proceed. Do you agree to release
this information to the service every time you access it?

Thoughts?

M
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