Another style question, wiki and javadoc langauge

[Tom Zeller]

How do you feel about changing this text from the wiki :

"The IdP's Attribute Filtering Engine is a policy engine that
determines what information, expressed as attributes as described in
the Attribute Resolver Design document, is released by the IdP. This
gives the author of the filtering policies the power to permit or deny
the release of information regardless of what a requester may have
asked for."

to :

"The IdP's Attribute Filter applies policies to attributes to permit
or deny their release."

Preferences ? Some folks prefer more words than less, I tend towards
less is more.

P.S. Thanks for responding to all of my this vs that questions.